My Holiday Highlight
WALT: write a recount about my school holiday using effective paragraphs.
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Topic: School Holidays.
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about your holiday experiences.
Text type: Recount
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Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine
Have you ever been to… Wow! What an exciting … Guess what?...During the school holidays …
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Structure:
P1: Introduction: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?
P2: One thing you did in the first week of the holidays
P3: One thing you did in the second week of the holidays
P4: Conclusion: What happened in the end? How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?
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Once you have finished make sure to mark with a buddy or yourself using our PARAGRAPH RUBRIC. Draw an image that represents your writing in sumo paint/ABC paint or create a wordcloud.
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Immersion Assembly
Topic: Immersion Assembly
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about our immersion assembly.
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Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
teachers, hilarious, delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine
Wow! What an exciting … Guess what?... What a blast we had at…
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Structure:
P1: Introduction: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?
P2: What did the teachers in each team do?
P3: What happened next?
P3: Conclusion: What happened in the end? How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?
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Start your writing here:In the holidays i went to my antey's house with my uncle .I went inside and it was clean.My nana had a flat screen and sky.Antey ask me “do you want some lunch”.I said “yes please”.We ate lunch then my uncle told me I was going home.
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