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Monday, 8 August 2016

lepa Holiday Highlight

My Holiday Highlight


WALT: write a recount about my school holiday  using effective paragraphs.
Topic: School Holidays.
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about your holiday experiences.
Text type: Recount
Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine

Have you ever been to…   Wow! What an exciting … Guess what?...During the school holidays …
Helpful Links: Brainstorm Vocab
Structure:
P1: Introduction: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?
P2: One thing you did in the first week of the holidays
P3: One thing you did in the second week of the holidays
P4: Conclusion: What happened in the end? How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?
Once you have finished make sure to mark with a buddy or yourself using our PARAGRAPH RUBRIC. Draw an image that represents your writing in sumo paint/ABC paint or create a wordcloud.  


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Topic: Immersion Assembly
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about our immersion assembly.
Text type: Recount Vocab
Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
teachers, hilarious, delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine

Wow! What an exciting … Guess what?... What a blast we had at…
Structure:
P1: Introduction: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?
P2: What did the teachers in each team do?
P3: What happened next?
P3: Conclusion: What happened in the end? How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?

Start your writing here:In the holidays i went to my antey's house with my uncle .I went inside and it was clean.My nana had a flat screen and sky.Antey ask me “do you want some lunch”.I said “yes please”.We ate lunch then my uncle told me I was going home.

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