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Thursday 23 August 2018

HOW I FEEL

BEDS AND BLANKETS
VERY COOL
NICE AND WARM
AND COSY TO
SLEEPING IS THE BEST
ALWAYS GOOD
LAY ON YOUR BED
TO CHANGE YOUR MOOD

5 comments:

  1. Hi Lepa
    u look tired, and nice poem, I will give it 9/10ish, itz amazing I LOVE IT SO MUCH
    #Sleeping
    By LyiSorn 😎

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  2. I like it lepa, but there's i few mistake in my opinion

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  3. Malo elelei, Lepa I really like how you where talking about how you wanted to go to sleep it really made me feel like I should start making poems about going sleep but I think u need to make your poem make a little bit more sense.From yours kindly Tatiana

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  4. Bula Vinaka, Lepa!

    What a sleepy poem you have there, well really liking your positive poem, it does rhyme very well and it is one of my favourite poems so far. One of my favourite parts of your poem is where you said. "Nice and warm and cosy to" Keep on working your best Lepa! Kai te Pai!!

    From Petesa!

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  5. Hey lepa What an interesting poem I can easily reconize that you are
    tired.Why are you tired is IT because you stay up late and play games or you wake up late
    Sincerely Monika

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