Monday, 29 February 2016

Cat at the beach

WALT: narrate a story that involves a cat, at the beach and a friend needs help

It was a beautiful sunny day to spend at the beach. max the cat was relaxing on the hot white sand. His master was paddling in the refreshing crystal water, when suddenly his friend jack came along. He was looking very sorry for himself.   Why the long face”said Jack,”Because I am thirsty said max and no place to live.”can you help me?”. “Ok you can live at my place and i’ll get a hidden water bottle”.”After do you want to play with me and my friends?”Jack said,”We are playing tag and i'll wait for you”.”Thanks”said Max.                          

The Day Things Started Disappearing

One windy day it was a strange day because people were disappearing because it was a haunted.people was screaming  and crying,Then they called 111.Then The police came and they did not help they ran away.Then the ghostbusters came,Names are Mason,jack,max and harry there are ghostbusters .Fifteen minutes later the four of them “they are too strong”said mason

lepa T1 Dictagloss Week 5

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word

Something strange was happening one by one things was disappearing.First my mum,Then my dad,And my sister were gone.Then it was

My score out of 10 is:5