Tuesday, 18 October 2016
Monday, 17 October 2016
lepa Holiday Highlight OR Immersion Assembly
My Holiday Highlight
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WALT: write a recount about my school holiday using effective paragraphs.
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Topic: School Holidays.
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about your holiday experiences.
Text type: Recount
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Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine
Have you ever been to… Wow! What an exciting … Guess what?...During the school holidays …
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Structure:
P1: Introduction: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?
P2: One thing you did in the first week of the holidays
P3: One thing you did in the second week of the holidays
P4: Conclusion: What happened in the end? How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?
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Once you have finished make sure to mark with a buddy or yourself using our PARAGRAPH RUBRIC. Draw an image that represents your writing in sumo paint/ABC paint or create a wordcloud.
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Immersion Assembly
Topic: Immersion Assembly
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about our immersion assembly.
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Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
teachers, hilarious, delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine
Wow! What an exciting … Guess what?... What a blast we had at…
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Structure:
P1: Introduction: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?
P2: What did the teachers in each team do?
P3: What happened next?
P3: Conclusion: What happened in the end? How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?
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Start your writing here:
Monday: In the holidays… I went to my nana's and grandpa's house with my cousins simon and betty and my aunt and uncle ben and eseta in a van.When we got there I saw my nana and grandpa.Then I went to the living room then I sitted and watched my nana sky tv watching cartoons with my cousins.Then my cousins were tired and they were falling asleep so I carried them to my nana's bed.
While I was watching cartoon my aunty said “Do you want to eat dapies”she said.”yes please”I said.So she went to buy pies when I turn the sky off and played on my gandpas xbox360 the game what i was playing was Assassin Creed 3 and Mirror Edge.After that my aunty came and buyed my pies.
I was eating my pies and I heard my nana and grandpa snoring with my cousins too so I went to my nana's and grandpa's room and played on my grandpa's xbox 360 and played some games
Wednesday, 12 October 2016
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