lepa's Cinquain Poem

lepa's Year 5/6 Camp Writing

My writing is going to be about year five and six camp, And what we did at camp and it’s was fun.

Camp is where you sleep in tents at the school field and not in your house at

school in term one week six in 2017. And the activities were kayaking,youth town

,killer zone (not violent just a game),rollerblading,table tennis bike tracking,and concert practice.

The highlight of camp was doing kayaking because you can get wet and people

was falling of the kayak.And killer zone because we used water balloons and the

last one is at the gi (short for glenn innes)pools and the last thing is concert on thursday

I would like to say to Mr burt for making this camp possible and say thanks

to the parents and teachers and our team leader, Mr sommerville. And my mum

At camp you need to do is have fun and in the future for every student has to do is teamwork.

lepa Narrative Practice: Lost in the forest

Walt: narrate a story about a character getting lost in the forest while camping

Narrative Writing Practice Test

Attribution

Attribution

You are going to write a narrative about a person going camping and getting lost in the forest

Planning Introduction:*Introduce Characters  *Mood/feeling * Setting/Where? Problem:*What was the problem? Action:*What happens straight after the problem? Solution:* How was the problem solved?

Start your writing here:

One day a man named Dantdm he was a professional gamer with slick hair and with his family.One day in the holidays an and his family was packing bags because he was going camping in a forest.five minutes later… “are you ready to go camping?” said Dan “yes,yup,sorta” “Ok let's go camping!”

“Let's go in my van into the woods!” Dan.5 hours later… “here we are The woods” it was afternoon.When they were making the tents and opening their bags while putting their stuff in the tents

Year 5&6 camp