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Showing posts with label 2016. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2016. Show all posts

Monday, 2 January 2017

my holiday pt 4

Tuesday: in the morning my brother woke me up and i had breakfast at the table.
Then i brushed my teeth and my dad went to work and my step mum was still sleeping then she woke up.
So i played on my dads Xbox 1 with my brother.
the game that me and my brother played was titan fall.
and my siblings were playing on my Chromebook and we played on the Xbox for long.
Then it was night time and my step mum told us to go sleep then we turned off the Xbox then we went to sleep.

Saturday, 31 December 2016

My holiday pt 3

Monday: Me, dad and my siblings went to shopping at a shopping mall in a van.
we were shopping for 1 hour the then we went back home.
We put the shopping in the house the we change to our togs to go to the beach with my cousins and aunties with us.Once we got there i grabbed my water gun toy and with my 6 year old brother had the same toys.Then we went to the sea and filled our water gun (toys)in the sea with my siblings.Then my dad took photos of all of us playing on the beach.Then we had to go eat we had sausages and noodles,roast chicken and pizza.While i was eating i had a drink of fizzy then i was full.Then me and my siblings went to the public showers then it was sunset so we packed up and went home.it was a nice day at the beach with my family.

Wednesday, 21 December 2016

my holiday pt 2

Sunday:
I woke up at nine o'clock in the morning i have breakfast.
Then i brushed my teeth and i played on my uncle's ps4
 played in it for two hours then I had lunch on the table.
When i was finished i went to play outside for long time
then it cane eight 'o clock the i went to bed

Monday, 19 December 2016

my holiday pt 1

Saturday:
me,my baby cousin,my aunty and my mum were droping me at my nanas house in my auntys car.
I got ready then my aunty said that she needed to fill out her paper at this place.
So i said "ok" so we went to the place that she was talking about. one hour later...
We got there it took forever the she was done then we hoped in the car and went 
to my nanas house

Thursday, 8 December 2016

lepa Verbs


Walt:Identify the difference in homonyms according to the spelling and meanings

Wednesday, 30 November 2016

lepa Homonyms


Walt: Use different language tools like adjectives, nouns and verbs in our writing
Identify the difference in homonyms according to the spelling and meanings

Tuesday, 29 November 2016

lepa Directions Part 2


Walt: give directions to locations using grid references, turns, and points of the compass.

Tuesday, 22 November 2016

Learning About Statistics

Walt: gather, sort, and display data to answer questions.

lepa Narrative Practice: Lost in the forest

Walt: narrate a story about a character getting lost in the forest while camping
Narrative Writing Practice Test

You are going to write a narrative about a person going camping and getting lost in the forest
Planning
Introduction:*Introduce Characters  *Mood/feeling * Setting/Where?

Problem:*What was the problem?

Action:*What happens straight after the problem?

Solution:* How was the problem solved?


Start your writing here:
One day a man named Dantdm he was a professional gamer with slick hair and with his family.One day in the holidays an and his family was packing bags because he was going camping in a forest.five minutes later… “are you ready to go camping?” said Dan “yes,yup,sorta” “Ok let's go camping!”

“Let's go in my van into the woods!” Dan.5 hours later… “here we are The woods” it was afternoon.When they were making the tents and opening their bags while putting their stuff in the tents



Monday, 21 November 2016

lepa Editing a Paragraph

Original

when it was our last day camping out in the bush my friends and i discovered that there was a bush that was really rare because there wasn’t that much bushes around because it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing it had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside it looked just like a stinky old bush
Change this paragraph
When it was our last day camping out.In the bush my friends and I discovered that there was a bush that was really rare.Because there wasn’t that much bushes around instead it was actually a huge forest it looked so amazing it had the smell of chocolate and strawberries on the outside it looked just like a stinky old bush.
Walt: edit a paragraph so that it has the correct punctuation marks and makes sense

Monday, 17 October 2016

lepa Holiday Highlight OR Immersion Assembly

My Holiday Highlight

WALT: write a recount about my school holiday  using effective paragraphs.
Topic: School Holidays.
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about your holiday experiences.
Text type: Recount
Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine

Have you ever been to…   Wow! What an exciting … Guess what?...During the school holidays …
Helpful Links: Brainstorm Vocab
Structure:
P1: Introduction: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?
P2: One thing you did in the first week of the holidays
P3: One thing you did in the second week of the holidays
P4: Conclusion: What happened in the end? How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?
Once you have finished make sure to mark with a buddy or yourself using our PARAGRAPH RUBRIC. Draw an image that represents your writing in sumo paint/ABC paint or create a wordcloud.  


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Topic: Immersion Assembly
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about our immersion assembly.
Text type: Recount Vocab
Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
teachers, hilarious, delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine

Wow! What an exciting … Guess what?... What a blast we had at…
Structure:
P1: Introduction: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?
P2: What did the teachers in each team do?
P3: What happened next?
P3: Conclusion: What happened in the end? How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?

Start your writing here:


Monday: In the holidays… I went to my nana's and grandpa's house with my cousins simon and betty and my aunt and uncle ben and eseta in a van.When we got there I saw my nana and grandpa.Then I went to the living room then I sitted and watched my nana sky tv watching cartoons with my cousins.Then my cousins were tired and they were falling asleep so I carried them to my nana's bed.




While I was watching cartoon my aunty said “Do you want to eat dapies”she said.”yes please”I said.So she went to buy pies when I turn the sky off and played on my gandpas xbox360 the game what i was playing was Assassin Creed 3 and Mirror Edge.After that my aunty came and buyed my pies.


I was eating my pies and I heard my nana and grandpa snoring with my cousins too so I went to my nana's and grandpa's room and played on my grandpa's xbox 360 and played some games